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flemmings ([personal profile] flemmings) wrote2007-09-16 03:37 pm
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Gaiden birthday ficlet for [livejournal.com profile] i_am_zan

Tenpou strolled down the main staircase of Western Army HQ, out the main entrance between the saluting guards, and into the wide front courtyard: and there came to a sudden stop. Two tall figures were walking towards him, heads turned together in conversation. Pure white and pure black, a startling visual contrast: his own commander, Goujun, and Goujun's brother Gouen, commander of the Army of the North. Tenpou pulled himself to attention while assuring himself, out the corner of his eye, that every soldier in sight was doing the same.

The two dragon kings halted some three metres from him.
"Thanks for walking me back," Goujun said. "And thanks again for all your kindness, Gouen."

"Not at all, Third Brother. My renewed congratulations on this auspicious occasion." The two brothers exchanged a smile, suggestive of something that Tenpou couldn't pinpoint. Gouen put fist to breast and bowed, soldier-like; gave Tenpou a glance and a small nod; and then turned and strode off. Goujun came over to Tenpou's side, looking vaguely pleased with life. A small smile lurked about the corners of his mouth and he seemed for once actually happy.

"Well, Marshal. Anything new?"

Tenpou saluted. "No sir."

"Good. Come up to my office. We should probably review those dispositions while we have time." He started off and Tenpou followed in his wake, chewing his lip a little.

"Mh, sir-" he began as they mounted the stairs, "I know it's none of my business--"

"--but you're going to ask anyway," Goujun observed with unwonted geniality. "What is it, Marshal?"

"Ahh- what's the auspicious occasion that Gouen-sama was referring to?"

"My birthday," Goujun said serenely.

"Oh. I see." Birthdays. Of course: dragons are creatures of Down Below where the seasons turn and all living forms- dragons included- have an end-point to their existence. "Congratulations, sir. I take it you were celebrating together?"

"The four of us, yes. A rare pleasure. Tell me, Marshal, do you kami celebrate your birthdays? *Can* you, when time works so differently up here?"

"Well, not the exact day itself, no. We consider New Year's Day to be everyone's birthday and we count ourselves a year older then."

"But New Year's Day is an arbitrary date decided at the emperor's pleasure."

"Yes sir. But since we change so little over time, it's no great matter if our ages are as arbitrary as the day itself."

Goujun shook his head as they paced down the corridor towards his office. "Not knowing what age you are- it's hard for a dragon to conceive of."

"I'm sure it is, if you're used to the regularity of Below. I know it's none of my busi--" He stopped, catching sight of Goujun's sardonic eye. "Er, yes, well. But might I ask how old you are now, sir?"

"Forty."

"I see." Actually, he realized, that told him nothing. "Forty earthly years?"

"Forty dragon years. In earthly terms, two thousand three hundred and twenty-six."

"I... see." He didn't, in fact. "Is forty a good age for a dragon?"

"It's an important age for a dragon." Goujun pushed the door open and Tenpou followed him in. "That's why it merits a special celebration."

"I can imagine. Forty is umm a good solid age, I assume? A milestone?"

"A definite milestone." Goujun sat down in his chair and leaned back, radiating satisfaction. "I'm finally old enough to drink."
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[personal profile] incandescens 2007-09-16 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay. That made me laugh out loud. :)

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
The mark of a successful story.
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[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
I was saying as much over at zan's lj. Not that Singaporeans need to keep warm, of course: but evidently it rains in December and everyone stays in and so...

[identity profile] xsmoonshine.livejournal.com 2007-09-16 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Poor Goujun couldn't drink for two thousand three hundred and twenty-six years!

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
2,326 earth years = 40 dragon years = 24 years old in human terms. Dragons are an abstemious race.

[identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
*claps hands!*

Oh how wonderful... thank you! Very much its a lovely little fic bit!

At the moment I'm feeling that 40 is a good age too! Life IS good!

*memories-ses it*

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
40 is a neat age. That's how old I was when I went to Japan. The best is yet to be etc etc. At least until 55...

[identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
I'll bear that in mind. ^_~

The children went shopping with Ste and they bought me "Hara Beko Ao Mushi" - The hungry caterpillar - to read to them at bedtime...isn't that so cool! ^__^

Also I was thinking of getting a/some book/s, were there any you found invaluable whilst you were learning/studying Japanese and still use today.

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh cool- the very hungry caterpillar in Japanese!

As for books- I did level 2 over ten years ago and pretty much coasted on what I'd learned at school. But the must-have for grammar was called in my day Particles Plus, and if I understand correctly, it's now been reissued by Kodansha as A Dictionary of Japanese Particles (http://www.amazon.com/Dictionary-Japanese-Particles-Kodansha/dp/4770023529). Highly recommended: it explains what I'd call verb tenses as well as those damnable particle phrases they love to ask you about.

[identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com 2007-09-18 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. That's a good rec. I was myself looking at that one the other day! I knew at some point I was going to have to get a book on particles...that one looked like a good bet!

OH and may I rec you a dragon fic (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3789365/1/)...it's only a little one! ^__^

I hope you enjoy!

Once again thanks

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Huh?? I never got the notification for this. Sorry. But that's a lovely little fic, with a sting in its tail. She's right- Goujun is an outsider in Heaven: different from the kami- and one might wonder how much he registers that fact and if that's one reason he's such a model officer and so patently loyal to the regime. A little over-compensation to demonstrate, to a homogenous people who distrust what's different, how utterly orthodox and above suspicion he is.

I wish we had more data to go on, dammit.

[identity profile] rasetsunyo.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
Ahahaha that would be why he's so laid back! Didn't see that coming. :D

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
A little alcohol would do Goujun no harm at all.

[identity profile] tentiqa.livejournal.com 2007-09-19 09:50 am (UTC)(link)
kyaa!!
that was totally unexpected!

Squees

~Tchan
;b

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Glad you liked it.

[identity profile] baka-gaijin.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 12:51 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, that was priceless! I love how you write Goujun.

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
(grins) Thanks. I'm glad if he reads remotely in character.